蜂王：你不再年轻

引用 2017-6-12 02:36 PM

AprilFool: “你的貌美如此惊人”----这句语法上好像有点儿问题，应该用“美貌”才对。

yes you are right!

引用 2017-3-2 07:01 PM

When you are old 　　


--- William Butler Yeats 　　


When you are old and grey and full of sleep, 　　

And nodding by the fire, take down this book, 　　

And slowly read, and dream of the soft look 　　

Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep; 　　


How many loved your moments of glad grace, 　　

And loved your beauty with love false or true, 　　

But one man loved the pilgrim Soul in you, 　　

And loved the sorrows of your changing face; 　　


And bending down beside the glowing bars, 　　

Murmur, a little sadly, how Love fled 　　

And paced upon the mountains overhead 　　

And hid his face amid a crowd of stars.

引用 2017-3-2 05:37 PM

“你的貌美如此惊人”----这句语法上好像有点儿问题，应该用“美貌”才对。

引用 2017-3-2 05:32 PM

至于这个“你不再年轻”，如果只是为做新诗强说老倒是无所谓，只是千万别真的这么想。你再老还能有主任老啊？   

引用 2017-3-2 05:29 PM

谁的诗？原诗是英文的？最好能把原诗附上。

引用 2017-3-2 08:47 AM

还记得在跨界歌王里，宋丹丹的儿子给她唱的那首《当你老了》。好感动！

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