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【英文歌曲中译】May It Be-- Enya// 回忆--歌曲英译

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发表于 2010-1-14 16:18:08 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 云天 于 2010-1-19 10:02 PM 编辑

下周一是Dr. MLK's birthday.
记得初次录音时, 选了 KING 的 《I Have a Dream》。
录了几遍,自己都听不下去,做罢。但还是加深了一丝印象。 所以上次看到D.W. 的引文,马上眼熟.

翻一首歌以做记念。 愿 King 的理念照亮世界,也照亮故国。
Let freedom ring under the heavens.


I have a Dream,may it be
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WTAbb44B0bo

May It Be

我祈祷
云天译

May it be an evening star
Shines down upon you
May it be when darkness falls
Your heart will be true
You walk a lonely road
Oh! How far you are from home

我祈祷,夜空之星
照亮你的路
我祈祷,暗夜茫茫时
你心仍真诚
你的路铺满孤独
哦,你远离家乡!

Mornie ut (darkness has come)
Believe and you will find your way
Mornie alanti� (darkness has fallen)
A promise lives within you now

黑暗笼罩
信念为你指引方向
暗夜沉沉
此刻希望与你同在!

May it be the shadows call
Will fly away
May it be you journey on
To light the day
When the night is overcome
You may rise to find the sun

我祈祷,阴暗之影
烟消云散
我祈祷,你的旅程
照亮白昼
暗夜溃败之时
你将起身迎向太阳!

Mornie ut�li� (darkness has come)
Believe and you will find your way
Mornie alanti� (darkness has fallen)
A promise lives within you now

黑暗笼罩
信念为你指引方向
暗夜沉沉
此刻希望与你同在!

A promise lives within you now

此刻希望与你同在!


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 楼主| 发表于 2010-1-14 16:19:17 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 云天 于 2010-1-14 04:36 PM 编辑





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发表于 2010-1-15 13:10:59 | 显示全部楼层
黑暗笼罩
信念为你指引方向
暗夜沉沉
此刻希望与你同在!

云天,译得真好!

你一文中说过你说话声音很轻,我怎么也想象不出你念I have a dream。(我当年也试过,也没念好。)
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-1-15 16:48:22 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢奎兄鼓励!
听这首歌 和 《I Have a Dream》,就不由会想到刘小波。 唉。。。。

读得我笑。 :))
从前借笔名涂小小说,胡言乱语。 早知会被认出,就不敢乱写了。

朗读确是欣赏诗文的好方法。  :))
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-1-15 16:51:10 | 显示全部楼层
I Have a Dream
Martin Luther King

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PbUtL_0vAJk

I am happy to join with you today in what will go down in history as the greatest demonstration for freedom in the history of our nation.

Five score years ago, a great American, in whose symbolic shadow we stand today, signed the Emancipation Proclamation. This momentous decree came as a great beacon light of hope to millions of Negro slaves who had been seared in the flames of withering injustice. It came as a joyous daybreak to end the long night of their captivity.

But one hundred years later, the Negro still is not free. One hundred years later, the life of the Negro is still sadly crippled by the manacles of segregation and the chains of discrimination. One hundred years later, the Negro lives on a lonely island of poverty in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity. One hundred years later, the Negro is still languished in the corners of American society and finds himself an exile in his own land. And so we've come here today to dramatize a shameful condition.

In a sense we've come to our nation's capital to cash a check. When the architects of our republic wrote the magnificent words of the Constitution and the Declaration of Independence, they were signing a promissory note to which every American was to fall heir. This note was a promise that all men, yes, black men as well as white men, would be guaranteed the "unalienable Rights" of "Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness." It is obvious today that America has defaulted on this promissory note, insofar as her citizens of color are concerned. Instead of honoring this sacred obligation, America has given the Negro people a bad check, a check which has come back marked "insufficient funds."

But we refuse to believe that the bank of justice is bankrupt. We refuse to believe that there are insufficient funds in the great vaults of opportunity of this nation. And so, we've come to cash this check, a check that will give us upon demand the riches of freedom and the security of justice.

We have also come to this hallowed spot to remind America of the fierce urgency of Now. This is no time to engage in the luxury of cooling off or to take the tranquilizing drug of gradualism. Now is the time to make real the promises of democracy. Now is the time to rise from the dark and desolate valley of segregation to the sunlit path of racial justice. Now is the time to lift our nation from the quicksands of racial injustice to the solid rock of brotherhood. Now is the time to make justice a reality for all of God's children.

It would be fatal for the nation to overlook the urgency of the moment. This sweltering summer of the Negro's legitimate discontent will not pass until there is an invigorating autumn of freedom and equality. Nineteen sixty-three is not an end, but a beginning. And those who hope that the Negro needed to blow off steam and will now be content will have a rude awakening if the nation returns to business as usual. And there will be neither rest nor tranquility in America until the Negro is granted his citizenship rights. The whirlwinds of revolt will continue to shake the foundations of our nation until the bright day of justice emerges.

But there is something that I must say to my people, who stand on the warm threshold which leads into the palace of justice: In the process of gaining our rightful place, we must not be guilty of wrongful deeds. Let us not seek to satisfy our thirst for freedom by drinking from the cup of bitterness and hatred. We must forever conduct our struggle on the high plane of dignity and discipline. We must not allow our creative protest to degenerate into physical violence. Again and again, we must rise to the majestic heights of meeting physical force with soul force.

The marvelous new militancy which has engulfed the Negro community must not lead us to a distrust of all white people, for many of our white brothers, as evidenced by their presence here today, have come to realize that their destiny is tied up with our destiny. And they have come to realize that their freedom is inextricably bound to our freedom.

We cannot walk alone.

And as we walk, we must make the pledge that we shall always march ahead.

We cannot turn back.

There are those who are asking the devotees of civil rights, "When will you be satisfied?" We can never be satisfied as long as the Negro is the victim of the unspeakable horrors of police brutality. We can never be satisfied as long as our bodies, heavy with the fatigue of travel, cannot gain lodging in the motels of the highways and the hotels of the cities. We cannot be satisfied as long as the negro's basic mobility is from a smaller ghetto to a larger one. We can never be satisfied as long as our children are stripped of their self-hood and robbed of their dignity by signs stating: "For Whites Only." We cannot be satisfied as long as a Negro in Mississippi cannot vote and a Negro in New York believes he has nothing for which to vote. No, no, we are not satisfied, and we will not be satisfied until "justice rolls down like waters, and righteousness like a mighty stream."¹

I am not unmindful that some of you have come here out of great trials and tribulations. Some of you have come fresh from narrow jail cells. And some of you have come from areas where your quest -- quest for freedom left you battered by the storms of persecution and staggered by the winds of police brutality. You have been the veterans of creative suffering. Continue to work with the faith that unearned suffering is redemptive. Go back to Mississippi, go back to Alabama, go back to South Carolina, go back to Georgia, go back to Louisiana, go back to the slums and ghettos of our northern cities, knowing that somehow this situation can and will be changed.

Let us not wallow in the valley of despair, I say to you today, my friends.

And so even though we face the difficulties of today and tomorrow, I still have a dream. It is a dream deeply rooted in the American dream.

I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: "We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal."

I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia, the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood.

I have a dream that one day even the state of Mississippi, a state sweltering with the heat of injustice, sweltering with the heat of oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice.

I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.

I have a dream today!

I have a dream that one day, down in Alabama, with its vicious racists, with its governor having his lips dripping with the words of "interposition" and "nullification" -- one day right there in Alabama little black boys and black girls will be able to join hands with little white boys and white girls as sisters and brothers.

I have a dream today!

I have a dream that one day every valley shall be exalted, and every hill and mountain shall be made low, the rough places will be made plain, and the crooked places will be made straight; "and the glory of the Lord shall be revealed and all flesh shall see it together."2

This is our hope, and this is the faith that I go back to the South with.

With this faith, we will be able to hew out of the mountain of despair a stone of hope. With this faith, we will be able to transform the jangling discords of our nation into a beautiful symphony of brotherhood. With this faith, we will be able to work together, to pray together, to struggle together, to go to jail together, to stand up for freedom together, knowing that we will be free one day.

And this will be the day -- this will be the day when all of God's children will be able to sing with new meaning:

My country 'tis of thee, sweet land of liberty, of thee I sing.

Land where my fathers died, land of the Pilgrim's pride,

From every mountainside, let freedom ring!

And if America is to be a great nation, this must become true.

And so let freedom ring from the prodigious hilltops of New Hampshire.

Let freedom ring from the mighty mountains of New York.

Let freedom ring from the heightening Alleghenies of Pennsylvania.

Let freedom ring from the snow-capped Rockies of Colorado.

Let freedom ring from the curvaceous slopes of California.

But not only that:

Let freedom ring from Stone Mountain of Georgia.

Let freedom ring from Lookout Mountain of Tennessee.

Let freedom ring from every hill and molehill of Mississippi.

From every mountainside, let freedom ring.

And when this happens, when we allow freedom ring, when we let it ring from every village and every hamlet, from every state and every city, we will be able to speed up that day when all of God's children, black men and white men, Jews and Gentiles, Protestants and Catholics, will be able to join hands and sing in the words of the old Negro spiritual:

                Free at last! Free at last!

                Thank God Almighty, we are free at last!
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发表于 2010-1-19 19:31:14 | 显示全部楼层
云天,你好!

想 请你 帮个忙。这里有首中文诗, 看能不能译成英文。

先谢了。

余香

回憶(原詞)呂佩琳、陳  崑 作詞  郭子究 作曲

春朝一去花亂飛, 又是佳節人不歸
記得當年楊柳青  長征別離時
連珠淚和針黹  繡征衣  繡出同心花一朵  忘了問歸期
思歸期  憶歸期  往事多少盡在春閨夢裡
往事多少盡在春閨夢裡 幾度花飛楊柳青  征人何時歸
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-1-19 21:56:55 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 云天 于 2010-1-20 10:38 PM 编辑

哦,摄影大师俏阿香来了啊。 好一片清新的绿。 :)
请代问你的 twin 好! 谢了。  :)

我试着译了下,仅供参考与批判:

春朝一去花亂飛,
又是佳節人不歸
記得當年楊柳青  
長征別離時
連珠淚和針黹
繡征衣  
繡出同心花一朵  
忘了問歸期
思歸期  憶歸期  
往事多少盡在春閨夢裡
往事多少盡在春閨夢裡
幾度花飛楊柳青  
征人何時歸

Remembrance

Spring mornings gone, fading flowers flying wildly
Here again comes the fine festival, yet my love returns not.
Those green willows of yesterday still fluttering in the memory
I think of the parting moment at time of your long journey.
Teardrops rolling down on the needle,
On your clothes I embroidered a blossom
With two hearts together as one.
But I forgot to ask you the date of return.
Longing for your return, thinking of your return
So many bygone memories can only float in my boudoir dreams.
So many bygone memories can only float in my boudoir dreams.
Flowers bloom and wither; willows turn green and yellow
My darling, when will you return home from the long journey?



注:
1. 同心--- concentric  太书面,未用。
2. 楊柳---- poplar and willow trees. 太长, 只取“柳”。
3. 征人----应为出征的士兵。  未译出“征”字。 网上查了下,这首曲好象做校歌唱的。 大概只表别离之意? 容我再想想。
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-1-19 21:58:37 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2010-1-20 00:08:52 | 显示全部楼层
云天手真快,我是万分佩服 :)
是学校孩子们春节表演用的。

再次感谢。一定向阿乐转达你的问候:)
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-1-20 00:15:03 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 云天 于 2010-1-20 10:38 PM 编辑

阿香,真巧,我正上来改两个字。
瞎译了。 也许还会再改。 :))

是啊,春节快到了。
祝你家小公子演出成功!:)

多谢阿香转达。 祝你们新春愉快,吉祥如意!


征人:my darling soldier ?
征衣:war suit ?

**********************

回忆

春朝一去花亂飛,
又是佳節人不歸
記得當年楊柳青  
長征別離時
連珠淚和針黹
繡征衣  
繡出同心花一朵  
忘了問歸期

思歸期  憶歸期  
往事多少盡在春閨夢裡
往事多少盡在春閨夢裡
幾度花飛楊柳青  
征人何時歸

Remembrance

Spring mornings gone, fading flowers flying wildly
Here again comes the fine festival, yet my love returns not.
Those green willows of yesterday still fluttering in the memory
I think of the parting moment at time of your long journey.
Teardrops rolling down on the needle,
On your war suit I embroidered a blossom
With two hearts together as one.
But I forgot to ask you the date of return.


Longing for your return, thinking of your return
So many bygone memories only float in my boudoir dreams.
So many bygone memories only float in my boudoir dreams.
Flowers bloom and wither; willows turn green and yellow
When will my darling soldier return home from the long journey?
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发表于 2010-1-20 09:09:43 | 显示全部楼层
征衣:Suit of armor, or uniform?

孩子们春节表演这个?有没有搞错?

就是高中女孩子,也不该到了怨征人的年龄吧?
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-1-20 15:25:37 | 显示全部楼层
回复 11# 滨州

谢谢奎兄指点!

"uniform" is a good one.  many thanks!  :)


阿香家的公子还小呢。
古狗查到,好象是一首台湾中学校歌。

骊歌还是弘一大师那曲好听。


懷舊歌曲 长亭送别(長亭送別)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rpkrme2mCcI
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-1-20 15:26:39 | 显示全部楼层
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-1-20 15:32:49 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 云天 于 2010-1-22 08:48 PM 编辑

再试一回:

回忆

Remembrance

春朝一去花乱飞,
又是佳节人不归
记得当年杨柳青  
长征别离时
连珠泪和针黹
绣征衣  
绣出同心花一朵  
忘了问归期


Spring gone, flowers flying aimlessly
Again comes the festival, yet you return not.
Green willows of yesterday still fluttering in memory
I remember the parting time when you left for the long journey
Teardrops rolling down on the needlework
I sewed a tunic for you
On which a flower of concentric hearts was embroidered.
But I forgot to ask for the date of your return.

思归期  忆归期  
往事多少尽在春闺梦里
往事多少尽在春闺梦里
几度花飞杨柳青  
征人何时归

I long for your return day after day
In my boudoir dreams live the bygone memories
In my boudoir dreams live the bygone memories
Year after year, flowers fade, willows turn green
O my darling, when will you come home from war?
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发表于 2010-1-20 22:18:29 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 竹音 于 2010-1-20 10:33 PM 编辑

云天,一版,二版,三版都看到了,喜欢。感动ing  确认一下:是Rememberance 还是 Remembrance?

不好意思,不是为我家小儿的。儿子不肯学中文,我们做父母的又放任散漫,所以就没去中文学校。

是身边的朋友知道我有一些很可爱的网上朋友:) ,于是请我帮忙。瞧我这网上的,世人皆知
都是出过钱的朋友, 不好拒绝:)

一直瞎忙,还没给你寄书呢。给我来个E好吗, 告诉我书寄哪里。
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发表于 2010-1-20 22:21:55 | 显示全部楼层
回复 11# 滨州

滨州好。
   
谢谢提醒,同意你的意见,是不太合适。也许我搞错了,是中文学校的大妈春节表演? 我会向朋友确认/提醒一下。

余香
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-1-20 22:41:30 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 云天 于 2010-1-20 11:21 PM 编辑
云天,一版,二版,三版都看到了,喜欢。感动ing  确认一下:是Rememberance 还是 Remembrance ...
竹音 发表于 2010-1-20 10:18 PM


阿香一字师好!
刚吃完晚饭进家门。一看有改错。赶紧跳上来。:)
多谢了!
回忆,“Memories" 也可以。
又有小改。见第三版。  到此为止。 :))

看来阿香网上网下都是大名人! :))

不急。有空给你去E。 阿蓉的香肠也还没吃到呢。:))
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发表于 2010-1-21 22:54:09 | 显示全部楼层
我也做了香肠, 要不要也寄点给你:) 没有阿蓉的正宗,山寨川味
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发表于 2010-1-22 03:18:58 | 显示全部楼层
回复 18# 竹音

余香好!在门帘上看到你。:)

老大妈的老大爹都海归了?
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-1-22 20:48:01 | 显示全部楼层
阿香,多谢你这么热心! :-)
上回看到阿蓉的香肠照片。 我家不大吃香肠,我开玩笑呢。 你自己留着慢慢吃。 :-)

顺问余管好!

各位周末好!
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